I cannot speak for my partner, and frankly, this video assignment ended up being highly collaborative. I can’t quite parse out where my contributions ended and his began. I know that neither of us were slacking, and that we both brought much effort and (admittedly spontaneous) creativity to the project. I will try, though, to speak from my perspective.
My concept was based on a personal frustration with current gender-based romantic dynamics: often, women are still expected to wait for men to ask them out, rather than the other way around. I took this oddly archaic dynamic and stretched it beyond my personal experience of frustratedly noticing disinterest when pursuing someone, and the idea passed through self-mockery and into the realm of absurdity. I looked again: what if a woman REALLY doggedly pursued whom they wanted? It stretched further into the realm of the suspense genre, since I like the tension that exists in suspense films. The main character lost any autobiographicality, got slapped with the label “crazy,” and the film was begun.
My technical goals were simple, since my technical skills are minimal. I wanted to learn more about handling a camera with stability and grace (We took turns, we shot about half and half of the scenes.) I wanted learn the basics of Final Cut. I just wanted an excuse to try shooting moving images again, since cinematographic techniques differ much from the still photographic techniques that I have already studied.
One technical aspect that is tied conceptually to the plot is the long hallways shot. It is supposed to give a feeling of increasing suspense and tension, which is tied to both the genre and the situation, and it does this through cinematography: the camera begins much further away from Ben than it ends. Lots of over-the-shoulder shots and first person shots are used for conceptual reasons, too: I wanted the audience to get uncomfortably inside the head of the unbalanced main character.
The only post-development fluke that changed the final product was the inability to shoot again. We wanted to redo a few of the shots, and that couldn’t happen. If I could change anything, I would take Melissa’s advice and change the audio on the long hallways shot. I would also reshoot it to make it slightly shorter and more dramatically different from beginning to end. Andrew’s sarcastic feedback that it “really captured the tedium of stalking” actually kind of hurt my feelings, because he so perfectly said exactly what was wrong with that shot. Other shots would be redone- I want different dialogue in the opening scene, for instance.
But this is what it is, now. I like it well enough, since the goal was to learn more about film-making, and I did. Also, it actually succeeds on one artistic point: the main character really does come across as crazy. That's more to the credit of the actress Gal than to the credit of either of the film-makers, though.
We Moved!!!
14 years ago

